No one can degrade us except ourselves; that if we are worthy, no influence can defeat us. (B.T.Washington, American educator)除了我们自己以外,没有人能贬低我们。如果我们坚强,就没有什么不良影响能够打败我们。
为了大家能更多的得到写作部分的25分,我们特精选了以下范文,希望同学们务必研读背诵!(尤其注意:文中划线部分为该体裁的套话;黑体部分为写作中的经典表达。)
May you succeed in the coming college entrance examination.
一、与报社等讨论稿(带手机利弊)
Dear Editor:
[引出话题] I'm a senior three student. I'm writing to tell you my opinion on whethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.
[反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom.
Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.
[个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、看对照表格写调查报告(孩子出国利弊)
[调查内容] A survey is taken onpublic opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.
[调查结果]From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future
However, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It's easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.
[解决措施]The survey shows thatthe government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. (句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth)
三、读柱状图表写调查报告 [注意句式变换]
Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.
The most striking contrast isin teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15 percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching, the second choice for girlsisto be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.
四、写信(过去/现在对比)
Dear editor,
I'm a middle school student.I once had a very happy family, but everything has changed because of my father.
He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday.
However, he is now quite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can't concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I'm very much worried and I'm afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father
Could you help me what to do? I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.
Li Hua